Double Page Spread Progression

I decided that I had to improve my title and make it look a lot more professional. 
I started to think about how I could achieve this and so I came up with this idea:

I think that adding some 'sticker' like boxes onto the title would make it stand out more and also take up more space on the page. 

I then decided that this was too blunt and so I needed to add some softness to it; I achieved this by adding a drop shadow to the font, and then preceded to adding a white stroke affect.

I think that I have achieved a title which screams out that it is pop. The colours are light and 'friendly' and also the font is bold and captivating. I think that it is a very good title as I think that it is very 'young' looking and therefore well suited to my target audience.